An increasing number of individuals in developing nations are buying cars for the first time. The main problem this cause is lack of parking places and the most viable solution is a public awareness campaign to encourage the use of public transports.
The principal problem associated with increase in purchase of four wheelers is limited geographical area. This is to say that we cannot enlarge the size of earth for fulfilling the need of parking spaces in locality. As a result, due to congested areas, people have to park their motorcars in front of their houses which leads to the reason of heavy traffic jams on roads. For example, 'Times of India' reported that 'Delhi' the city in India, 90% people have their own cars which they park in front of their houses which lead to traffic jams on roads.
To tackle this problem the government should launch a publicity campaign in the media and in societies to educate people about the difficulties of owing excessive amount of vehicles. Many men and women are buying it for easy commuting. However, they do not understand negative phenomena of this problem. Therefore, by education they can be motivated to use public transport so that problem of parking spaces can be tackled. For instance, a recent government survey found that 30% of people in India are mitigating the purchase of cars by getting awareness from TV commercials.
In conclusion,majority of people in different countries are purchasing new cars is a major issue that can result in people having less space to park, and they have to use public roads for it that leads to heavy congestion. However, it can be addressed through educating people about the dangers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , majority
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97183098592 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72910721396 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535211267606 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1582398422 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.615384615 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208667371292 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782117454712 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438518240239 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136729096517 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378230556676 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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