More and more people today are using computers and electronic devices to access information. Therefore it is no longer any need to print books, magazines or newspapers.
To what extent you agree or disagree?
Indubitably, the internet has brought the world close, and individuals are able to access information from anywhere around the world with the help of the internet by using mobile phones. It is often argued that readers do not buy newspapers, books, and magazines because every piece of information is available over the internet. However, I firmly concur with this given notion.
Apparently, individuals access information through the internet using smartphones, laptops, and Ipads holds a wide range of constructive benefits. To commence with, the fact that it is convenient to use electronic devices like smartphones and computers to access any information on the internet. For example, all the news channel companies have created applications with the help of different technologies for their users where a reader can easily access and read the information at any time from anywhere across the globe. Secondly, this kind of trend has benefits for the environment in terms of reducing the effect of deforestation. Thirdly, people are able to read news articles in any language with the help of technology which has innovated few inbuilt programs in their online sites.
On the other hand, some people prefer to buy books and newspapers because they are portable. For instance, a student can easily study the fundamental concepts from books instead of reading online content as sometimes it is quite tough work to find good content on the internet. In addition to it, they do not like reading on the screen because it leads to stressful activity.
In conclusion, although some individuals buy books and newspapers because of their old habit, I believe that using the internet to search and find any information online with the help of electronic gadgets such as android phones or I-phones, computers, and others devices have provided benefits to modern society.
- There have been some problems with the bus service especially its reliability in your area over the last two weeks Write a letter to the manager of the bus company In your letter describe what the problems are explain how these problems are affecting you 78
- You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practice in the community hall You have been told however that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall Write a letter to the manager In the letter describe what 78
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task You have just received a credit card statement from your bank The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make Write a letter to the bank manager In the letter Introduce 73
- You had a good meal in a local restaurant with your family Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it describe the meal you had and why you think the restaurant is worth visiting 78
- You recently traveled by plane While you were at the airport a member of staff helped you with a problem and now you would like to show him her your appreciation Write a letter to the manager at the airport In your letter 1 explain what the problem was 2 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2474916388 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82217179477 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541806020067 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.430414721 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.75 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.75 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168408013051 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658057593883 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635414180737 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103457523381 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390652755428 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.