More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
It is irrefutable fact that many wild species are either on the edge of extinction or they are at risk of becoming extinct. Deforestation and hunting wildlife are the major causes of this situation. Fortunately, there are ways to solve this problem. Aforementioned.
To begin with, one of the major causes of this problem is deforestation. As there is tremendous increase in population as a result, humans are destroying animal habitats by building houses, destroying forest to plant crops which leads faunas to move into human area, and as they are the threat for humans hence, creatures are being killed by mankind. Another reason for this phenomenon is hunting. The animals are slaughtered for their skin. To illustrate, Gucci, one of the famous brands uses animal skin to produce luxurious bags and jackets. Adding to it, they are also killed for consumption like cattle’s.
However, despite these challenges, there are some ways to cope up with this issue. Firstly, Strict legal actions should be taken by government, so that people will abide the rules, and if someone found disobeying the regulations, they should be penalized. Next, awareness campaigns should be launched to educate people about animal rights and inform them about the importance of saving wildlife.
In conclusion, human activities such as removal of the forest for their own benefits and merciless act of killing animals for production of leather and slaughtering for medicines should be stopped by imposing strict rules because, we have no rights to decide whether wildlife should live or not instead we should put our efforts to protect them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20532319392 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80544986505 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631178707224 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.1182314209 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.307692308 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21363878401 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881516635652 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585887982412 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127024715561 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052495436522 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.