More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
As we are moving towards urbanisation , almost all animals are disappearing and rest are on the verge of it. We rarely see any wild species in the forest. There is a cause behind the current scenario which I will list down in this passage along with the steps which we can take to prevent this.
To begin with, wild animals living in forests are very hard to find these days, which has numerous reasons for that. Firstly, due to the rise in population there is demand of home, to fulfil their needs men are cutting trees for construction. As the number of houses are increasing more wood is required , which is taken from forest and animals donot have shelter.
Secondly, few people as their hobby do animal hunting to sell them in market at a good price. For example, they kill tigers , deer for their skin to earn.
Thirdly, due to global warming creatures are dying , because of extreme warm and cold weather. Pesticides used by farmers are also very hazardous for them.
In my opinion measures should be taken early by preserving the environment , strict orders have to pass for not cutting the trees, recycling and buying sustainable products , by growing native plants and black out the products which are made up of species.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75813953488 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38447370938 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688372093023 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1953918324 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183103321294 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575062102978 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394363819378 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790808171953 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505118064988 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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