More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
There are myriads of animal species that are about to extinct and the number of them is increasing day by day. It is going to be understood that several reasons such as hunters, introducing animals to an unrelated region exist and authorized people can take an action for this.
First and foremost, nobody can deny that vast number of people are either big fun of hunting, and have developed this as a hobby, or just get involved with the activity for having food. Regarding the latter case which is more dominant, variety of animals such as ducks, and deer have edible meat, which makes people hunt them in the places where they are especially abundant. Hence, their population undergoes a gradual decrease. Secondly, introduction of new species to an area with full of a particular animal species, which they prey on, poses a threat on these indigenous animals. For example, introduction of cats to Australia had destructive effects on some local animals causing their extinction. Thus, alien animals are another reason for the phenomenon.
To address the problem, the government can easily restrict the number of hunts by imposing penalty. In general, those who live in rural parts experience financial burden and are not able to purchase meat, which, eventually, leads them to kill dozens of animals. That is why they are more likely to avoid hunting as they will have to pay for the fine afterwards. When it comes to the second threat, assuming that the alien species have already been introduced to the area where they are not supposed to live in, these animals can be isolated from their prays as in Australia.
To conclude, the question of how the number of animals having possibility of vanishing is asked. The hunters are said to be one of possible sources and prevention can be done by penalizing them. Finally, introduced species being the second main cause may be kept away from the region of their prays.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... from the region of their prays.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, hence, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92048929664 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53870891841 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574923547401 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4779039497 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.266666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207425180601 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673930414205 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454203855402 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13038118769 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028722292845 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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