More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
Increased number of animal species are feared to disappear soon from the earth with lot others are expected to be in that list. This essay will discuss the main causes for this phenomenon primarily deforestation and increased poaching cases. This essay will suggest the solutions including methods to control deforestation and the stringent law enactment to curb killing of animals.
Removal of forest cover and rampant attacks on wild life continue to be the major worry resulting in reduced population of animals. Deforestations leads to reduced forest cover hampering overall lifecycle of animals thereby reducing their average lifespan. Further, animal poaching is common in many countries for want of animal skin and fur. For example, deforestation and animal killing in Jalna has led to extinction of white tiger. Therefore, removal of trees and attack on animals continue to be major causes of wildlife extinction.
Government needs to incentivise people to plant trees in and around forests to the possible extent. In addition, anti poaching law enforcement need to made strict. Both these measures would ensure increased forest area for the animals without being fear of being killed. To exemplify, In hills of himachal Pradesh people have seen increased police arrests in poaching cases and has led to slow increase in numbers of wild boar. Promoting green cover and enforcing strict laws around animal killing can possibly control this dreadful problem.
In conclusion, rapid extinction of particular species of wild animals and endangering others continues to be the major problem. This essay discussed the main causes like deforestation and poaching leading to this. This essay also suggested the solutions to control this mainly through increase in forest cover and strict enforcement of anti poaching laws.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45422535211 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70004766428 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531690140845 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9178280787 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.8125 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242616666807 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877814527776 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612430310904 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163351822914 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051099035972 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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