More people are spending their free time watching movies, why is this? Is it a good or bad?
At present, many people are watching movies in their leisure time, due to easy accessibility as well as it required less cost when compare to other activities such as Golf, billiards, etc. In the following passage, I will illustrate some causes for this trend and share my opinion with suitable example.
Of late, many mobile applications like Amazon prime and Netflix provide latest movies with variety of genres, which enables people to watch their favourite films easily. Additionally, the increased internet speed help many people to watch movies instantly through their mobile phones and laptops are considered to be another important reason. Similarly, currently many movie makers understand the current taste of people, and produce movies with interesting topics such as political drama and thrillers, which would encourage more people to watch during their leisure time. Thus, it has been considered that easy availability and movies based on current trend, aids more people to watch movies in their free time.
Because of this trend, many people tend to lose their social life significantly, which reduce their interaction with family members, friends and neighbours. Moreover, some youngsters are becoming obese by watching movies for long hours, which reduces their time for personal fitness routines. For instance, my friend's kid watches movies in his vacation time and currently he is suffering due to over weight. More over, people are forgetting to learn carrier skills, which would help their career instead wasting their leisure time by watching films.
In conclusion, people watching movies in their leisure time is a bad trend, which could wisely, used for learning other vital skills from career perspective. Both parent and teachers should foster children to use free time to involve in various sports activities, which will help them to stay fit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'provide the latest'.
Suggestion: provide the latest
...lications like Amazon prime and Netflix provide latest movies with variety of genres, which en...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, similarly, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39455782313 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50483358912 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598639455782 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1862683458 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.166666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312494032599 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135175896115 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062262310704 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20056908767 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448513492308 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.