In most countries, most people prefer rented house rather than buying one. Describe advantages and disadvantages of renting.
In contemporary world, owning a house becomes a challenging task for majority of people; thus, few people are complacent on renting a place. However, I believe renting a house has more drawbacks.
At the outset, there are many negative aspects of renting a house, but the foremost is the cost associated with the hefty rent. In other words, every month the person is entitled to pay huge amount as a rent, which instead could be used for owning property. To elucidate, if he owns a house, same amount could be payed as installment to a home loan, which would subsequently give him ownership, but the wealth is wasted if the person choose to stay in rented property. Secondly, one cannot refurbish or make changes in rented property as per comfort and convenience. For any small change, the owner's permission remains the final decision, making the tenant compromise with his need. For instance, my friend stays in rented house and she hates the color on the walls; nonetheless, she could not change it because her house-owner denies repainting job.
On the other hand, there are few benefits of rented house. The owned bungalow cannot be shifted every time as per convenience whereas the rented house certainly can be chose nearby office or children's school. Undeniably, this can prove helpful for people who are in jobs that involves lot of transfer-ability in jobs. Moreover, the tenant do not have to worry for furniture and other appliance by opting fully furnished rented apartment. Therefore, consistent to this line of thinking it can prove beneficial for some tenants.
To sum up, I radically opine that it is always better to buy the house because it saves money, and gives freedom to decorate it the way we want, without any interference of landlords.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 594, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'owners'' or 'owner's'?
Suggestion: owners'; owner's
... convenience. For any small change, the owners permission remains the final decision, ...
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Line 9, column 355, Rule ID: WORRY_FOR[1]
Message: The verb 'worry' does not normally take the preposition 'for'. Did you mean 'worry about'?
Suggestion: worry about
...bs. Moreover, the tenant do not have to worry for furniture and other appliance by opting...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95973154362 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71645487103 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624161073826 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4932167456 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.571428571 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138151259067 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520764571287 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329621177725 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892719507311 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311729531955 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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