The most effective way to solve the current traffic and pollution problem in the city is to encourage people to move from the suburbs into the city centre. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Since the past decade, the problems that have been engrossing widely are pollution and traffic congestion, in cities.Hence, to eradicate this issue, migration from suburb to cities is thought to be a possible way which I believe may have some complication as well ,however benefits are enormous.
My Point of views can be elaborated with multifarious points below.Initially, shortening in the number of transportation buses, if the family will move to add the same city where they get basic amenities related to healthcare and education then the proportion of regular commuters will be declined. Apparently, the number of scholars, who have to travel by public transport or instead use their private vehicles, which, in turn contributes to contaminate the environment as well goes on decline. Further, emphasising on my point of view, government ought to take responsibility to aware masses and needs to take brave initiative to save the environment from such problems.
If this will be approached there will be less number of private vehicles which means no line of vehicles on the lanes. Besides, it would be a step for the betterment also because in case of any emergency people will seek for aid at nearby hospital.
On the stark contrast, there is a reason which reflects my contradicting notion is the problem of scarcity of land and increased stress on the administration.The cost of spending on housing facilities will have to be hiked so that each segment of society would live in ease with necessary requirements.Consequently, there might be chances of less economical development.
To recapitulate my point of view ,after confabulating my all reasons it can be concluded that for better development and for enhancing quality of life people need to be vacate from countryside to mega cities .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, consequently, hence, however, if, may, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19163763066 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14133846159 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637630662021 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.3804660399 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.0 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0992751115517 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357094693998 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473099902679 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0618614486721 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532835652893 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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