Most medical doctors want to work in cities where they will make a lot of money. Yet in many rural areas there are not enough doctors. What are the reasons for this problem? How can it be solved?
It is claimed that the majority of medical personnel are willing to serve people in metropolitan areas to earn more money and resist working in the countryside. This essay will suggest that advanced medical equipment and well-paid jobs in urban areas are the biggest reasons for this trend and argue that reforming medical hospitals and providing appropriate packages to doctors would be viable solutions.
To begin with, medical buildings in cities are equipped with the latest technology. For the past few years, due to the advent of technology, it has become convenient for surgeons to treat people adequately with the help of instruments that might not be possible in rural areas, which are under development. A recent survey has shown that people are continuously migrating to cosmopolitan cities to access medical treatment owing to reliability. Apart from this, salary is another paramount factor. Medical students have to pay a massive amount of money as fees to get degrees, so it is obvious that they would prefer to do the job, where they are paid well.
In terms of solutions, paying attention to the condition of hospitals situated in villages is the main measure to deal with this issue. Authorities are solely responsible for making changes in the health centers by employing a management committee so that employees prefer to work there. Furthermore, providing grants by governing authorities to these clinics would alleviate the problem of salaries. In some villages of India, for instance, the government has improved the facilities in 2016 by spending a substantial budget, and more than required workers apply for the job in those hospitals.
In conclusion, the trend of working in citified fields due to the high standard of machines and good wages is burgeoning these days. Despite this, upgrading methods to treat the masses and allocating justifiable pay to health instructors are the pragmatic ways to mitigate this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, well, apart from, as to, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23885350318 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82073751063 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589171974522 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9093853455 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.538461538 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262395960292 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750846318928 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539244168112 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143042934129 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753138783047 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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