Some people consider price as the most important thing to consider when buying a product such as a cell phone and services like medical treatment. Do you agree or disagree?
It is claimed that cost is an indispensable factor to consider while purchasing goods and services. This essay completely disagrees with this statement because the quality and reliability of things are the main factors that need to be taken into account.
Firstly, the Standard of the item should be emphasized more. No doubt, price is usually directly proportional to the quality of the product; however, there are some sellers who sell their goods having high values at cheap prices so that looking at the standard rather than the price would be a wise choice. Even if the price rises up sometimes, people should not compromise with the grade of the service as it would benefit for the long run which ultimately reduces the need of spending a lot of money again on the same thing in the near future. Mobile phones, for instance, prove to be a boon in almost every field of human life, therefore, in this case, it is quality that matters a lot rather than money spent on it.
Secondly, there are some situations where the reliability of service is prioritized. Medical treatment is a paramount factor that one should not ignore for the sake of security of life, as the delay in availing of the service may lead to a life-threatening situation. Furthermore, if the treatment seems a costly affair, one should not hesitate to borrow money to proceed for getting the best services. A recent survey conducted has shown that 45% of people who tend to set with low budget to cure their health problem suffer more in the future.
In conclusion, payment is given much attention by some people when it comes to access facilities, but this essay argues that sureness and solidity of items are more important for long-term benefits provided by these.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62372932208 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576666666667 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.412327466 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.818181818 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0909090909 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162028901393 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539822979353 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033914158975 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887576102414 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00526786781382 0.056905535591 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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