Most people believe that stricter punishment should be given for traffic offences.
To what extent do you agree?
Although topics, in all likelihood, will never yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on the traffic crimes and their level of hardness for the punishment that shall be applied can lead to thought-provoking discussion. Irrespective of the numerous arguments that exit on either side, I strongly agree and believe that we have to be considerably restricted with these crimes to reduce their number and effect.
There are a number of reasons in favor of my stance. To commence with, Traffic offences are similar to civil crimes severity and they can cause the same catastrophic consequences. It is imperative to note that traffic crimes can lead to partially human body loss or more severe lousy situation such as death. As a result of that, the aforementioned discussions shows that traffic and different kinds of crimes have the same level of bad results.
Another pivotal aspect of the argument is that if the punishment traffic system is weak, it will cause a catastrophic situation in societies. When people find many defects in the law, they use them inadequately such as driving without respect the lights signal or under alcohol effect. This exemplifies that a weak system will make many troubles in the country.
In conclusion, I see that there is equally potential evidence to support the argument that I have provided and hence I strongly recommend that traffic crimes shall be considered as one of the worst offences because it will not effect on an individual only, but it will create a chronic effect on the whole society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 109, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'crimes'' or 'crime's'?
Suggestion: crimes'; crime's
..., Traffic offences are similar to civil crimes severity and they can cause the same ca...
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Line 4, column 228, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
... the worst offences because it will not effect on an individual only, but it will crea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05058365759 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90236903352 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571984435798 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.961170085 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.8 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119764404142 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438027767169 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332940783771 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704214651444 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038004386674 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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