Most people believe that stricter punishment should be given for traffic offences.
To what extent do you agree?
Although such topics, in all likelihood, will never yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on the level of punishment that shall be applied on traffic offences can lead to thought-provoking discussions. Irrespective of the numerous arguments that exit on either side, I strongly agree and believe that we must be considerably restricted with some sort of strict laws to reduce the rise of offences number
There are a number of reasons in favour of my stance. To commence with, Traffic offences are similar to civil crimes severity, and they cause the same catastrophic consequences. It is imperative to note that the traffic offences may lead to partially human’s body loss and it will make a severe lousy situation such as death. As a result of that, the aforementioned discussion shows that traffic offences and different kinds of crimes have the same level of drastic results.
Another pivotal aspect of the argument is that if the countries have a weak punishment system, the country security global ranking will go down rapidly. First and foremost, when a country security rank is bad, the economy will have huge losses. This exemplifies that a weak system will make many several negative impacts on the community.
In conclusion, I see that there is equally potential evidence to support the arguments I have provided, and hence, I strongly recommend that the traffic offences shall be considered as one of the worst acts of its wide effect, not only on the one person, but also they have a chronic effect on the whole society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, so, in conclusion, sort of, such as, as a result, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04651162791 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91210916431 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585271317829 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.0461508849 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.666666667 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0924334828122 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035685536517 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025975907759 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0550891873395 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371678368138 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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