Numerous people pay tax bills because it aids to prosper their country , there are some people who believe that other responsibility are more essential than taxes. From my perspective, I subscribe to the proposition that paying taxes should be compulsory for everyone.
On the one hand, the majority of people have chosen to pay taxes and use public services, organizations than attend privite ones. The resons of it, compared to the price of privite services , the state services are not so pricy, and privite service are not more significantly controled by the state, the state offers the deversity of services.The government should defray expenses to maintain and to develop a variety of different infrastructures, to increase opportunities of people. For instance, it is necessary to advance medical equipments, to develop new drugs, treatment, and also to improve enviromental repercussion, so the financial support is vital necessaty for its. If the government imposes a tax bills for any human profits, the government would fund maintaining and developing infrastructures.
On the one hand, it is considered by some that why must they pay taxes , if they do not use services? For instance, someone who is healthy pays for a tax bills, and does not attend public medical services. These believe that instead of paying taxes, they should carry out their duties. For example, American people solved this issue, the government does not charge fee for medical healthcare , however, everyone pay medical services. Nevertheless, it is undeniable that, unfortunetly, there are challenges which could be solved by people joint efforts, such as enviromental issue, transport infrastructure. These problems has a global meaning and funding is requested to solve these ones. As a result, the authority's government should levy taxes, assisting
rise to the state capital which will be aimed to combat global issues.
In conclusion, by imposing tax bills, the government can defray expences to improve, to solve global issues, only joint efforts of people could be facilitated , simlified some problems .
- Some people say it is the government’s responsibility to fund school buses, while others think parents should be responsible for bringing their kids to school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 95
- The tendency for human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashions in clothes and other consumers goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 68
- Scientists agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people Others think education will not work Discuss both views and give your opinion 70
- some people think that child's success in adult life depends on the way their parents brought them up . do you agree or disagree. 84
- The tendency for human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashions in clothes and other consumers goods. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
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...be facilitated , simlified some problems .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39024390244 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04445530314 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551829268293 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9849206302 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.285714286 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236454901595 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924407310701 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833028671889 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12746405315 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0997872049426 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.