Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Recently, everyone tries to find an easy and time effective way to use while reaching a certain destination. One of the extremely quick inventions is the motorcycles. Although, bikes saved a lot of time in the peak hours, motorways are not the ultimate safe way to use. We are going to discuss the unwanted effects of the motorways and some solution which can be implemented.
Firstly, if we talk about the problems, we will definitely find many. The most important points that we can highlight as major consequences, are the repeatable accidents and the result of these accidents on the driver. No doubt that arriving early to work and avoiding traffic jam is satisfying, but also protecting ourselves must be considered. When motorways are at it’s full with bikers, this results in more accidents due to the speed while driving. It is very tempting to use the highest speed while on a bike and even harder to control it. Another undesirable result is the injuries following the accidents. I remember I have read in the local magazine last week about a devastating accident that happened to a 21 years old bike driver while using the motorway, unfortunately the young man has lost two of his limbs.
Secondly, we can illustrate some of the solutions that can be studied for use. One is to build wider motorways, two is to apply fines on exceeding the speed limit when driving. It has been proved lately that the reasons for most accidents were because of how narrow the lanes are, so if we managed to widen them than this way it will save use more dramatic results. Also increase the number of lane is essential. Furthermore, limiting the speed will with no doubt decline the amount of accidents.
In conclusion, motorways have saved us a lot of struggle, but it also have their own negative impacts that needs to be fixed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7893081761 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70938731762 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578616352201 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1595256797 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5882352941 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0910048884935 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0294063856187 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266134899886 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630520048118 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170256111 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.