News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Every work has a predefined procedure from its beginning to the end. Similarly, when a news is published it is in the power of editors to filter the piece of news shown on television and the ones that will appear in newspapers. I believe there could be several factors for their choices, such as marketing and ratings. But this should not sidetrack them from promoting more good news. This essay will discuss further on these issues.
News editors published the new that has potential to attract more viewers and readers. People are always on the lookout for latest information and the channels that can provide them first receives the most attention. For example, when the news of corona virus was released everyone was focus on BBC as it releases latest updates on international news.
In addition, if the channel or newspaper can promote few products during the commercial breaks or advertisements, they become popular among the businesses as well. For instance, due to the news of corona virus spreading, people have become more aware of personal hygiene and when the channels promote that Lifebuoy will protect from germs, people buy it.
However, it is the duty of the media to not only reflect the bad news but also the good ones. Now a days, people are accustomed to hearing news of crimes, murder, illness and other social afflictions most of the time. But in spite of these situations, there are some good things happening around as well, which comes in a small section of the news. The reporters and editors should focus on them equally.
To sum up there maybe numerous factors that might influence the news that is broadcasted or printed as news but the editors must bear in mind to convey the good and bad news in equal measures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...s beginning to the end. Similarly, when a news is published it is in the power of edit...
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Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'releases the latest'.
Suggestion: releases the latest
...eleased everyone was focus on BBC as it releases latest updates on international news. In a...
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Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...ct the bad news but also the good ones. Now a days, people are accustomed to hearing news ...
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Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...he bad news but also the good ones. Now a days, people are accustomed to hearing news ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, similarly, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83056478405 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49390378233 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554817275748 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6807277623 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278683612566 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910139672579 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699830690433 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16511566332 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646670615462 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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