News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
Although such topics, in all likelihood never will yield, a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on the causative factors influencing the news can lead to thought-provoking discussions. My view is that irrespective of the numerous arguments that exist, I believe that these days unpleasant news is more often reported. Through the course of this argument, I will put forth my points and calculations considering both sides of the argument.
There are a number of reasons in favor of my viewpoint. One of them is that, contemporary news highly depends on contents that attract plethora of viewers thus uplifting high revenues for their business. For instance, news about the divorce of the superstar Hrithik Roshan was not important for the masses however it was featured highly. Furthermore, it is also seen that a host of the news broadcast is either adverse or unpleasant. This type of news captivates the attention of folks as they stimulate suspicion in their mind, also becoming addicted to them. For example, an article on the loss of life due to heavy rain is the top most priority during rainy season in India contrast to the precautionary measures advocated by the weather research department.
There are a few aspects of positive news that needs special mentioning. They have the power to instill more affection towards the country and unite everyone. Like the good performance of the sports team, excellence in the field of technology, space or research, such news rejuvenate us, but their priority is lesser compared to the former as their followers are rare. For example, the ratio of people watching sports news is very less in India because of lower interests from women and children.
I see that there is equal potential evidence to support my arguments I have provided and hence, my opinion is that my opinion is that unfavorable news are highly advocated over those that are imperative. I am inclined to believe that news editors have lost all their liberty to create the best piece of articles that will encourage us to believe in good and these will continue until the occurrence of a revolutionary change.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'will' and 'yield'.
Suggestion: will never yield
...Although such topics, in all likelihood never will yield, a consensual agreement, a constructive...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0593220339 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86552229808 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584745762712 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4771146563 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.4 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0536918285913 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0186507058517 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0155854764779 0.0667982634062 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0346293916846 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182847152725 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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