some people believe that it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we are care about them. others think that there are better ways to show affection to them. discuss both views and give your own opinion.
<span style="font-size: 17.6px;">Many men and women consider giving presents as a token of affection. However some people believe that there are other effective means to express affection. Irrespective of both the arguments, I think that gifts are a superior expression of care and respect. Through the course of this essay, I would like to put forth all the points and calculation by considering both sides of the argument.
Firstly, the physical presence of alms in human dwellings strengthens the relationship between human beings. It is important to note that through prolong view of premiums increases the production of blissful feelings within people. As a consequence of this, the relationship turns out to be long-lasting and strongly bonded. This benefit cannot be neglected because some experts have proved that communities that bestowing things as gifts have less reports of divorce cases. In such a situation, this gesture can act as a powerful tool in order to improve the health of an alliance. Thus, handing over gifts can be used to extend affectionate feelings and express togetherness towards those who are beloved.
On the other, some opponents think that other alternatives must be used to showcase feeling of companionship and caring. Like paying expenditure incurred for education, food or shelter. This is beneficial for those who are going through a strong hurdle in life. This involves a strong dedication and effort. As a result, there is a high probability that lesser people would practice it. Additonally it increases the expectation of the receiver which can demolish the whole concept of expressing sentiments among family members and companions.
To conclude, demonstrating affinity through gifts play a vital role in increasing the fondness and liking between loved ones. But some people also assume that there are other options to showcase such emotions. I think that, giving gifts is a sign of closeness and intimacy.</span>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...iving presents as a token of affection. However some people believe that there are othe...
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Line 5, column 445, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun reports is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ies that bestowing things as gifts have less reports of divorce cases. In such a sit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, thus, well, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41290322581 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.167408497 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6473447305 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.3157894737 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3157894737 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31578947368 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160556728855 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470405961346 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494125188914 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102859186073 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478844270277 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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