In this era, we can see how fast the information move from one place to another. We can easily grab a newspaper, a magazine, or even browse the internet to find out the latest news. Some people believe that the presence of internet will eliminate the need of newspapers and magazines. Meanwhile, some others argue that all of them will never substitute each other.
The significant growth of internet has indeed brought priceless advantages to our life. Internet can provide us up‐to‐date news at an incredibly fast pace than any other conventional media like newspaper and magazine can achieve. Next on, by opting to gather news via the internet, we could help save our environment since we can reduce the number of resource used to produce the paper.
Meanwhile, looking at from another standpoint, first of all, it is really too‐good‐to‐be‐true to have everyone in this world reading news via the internet. In reality, there are still a lot of people out there who prefer to get information from newspaper and magazine. This has been caused by, but not limited to, the fact that reading news through the internet is too tiring since we have to keep our eyes staring at monitor over and over. Furthermore, we cannot also fully trust any information spread out in the internet as everyone can put up any news as they wish. That way, to some extent, the information printed in the magazine and newspaper seems to be more trustable since it has passed through a number of strict procedures.
In conclusion, nowadays everyone has a variety of choices to get the news and information. Therefore, all things considered, I believe that the role of magazine and newspaper will be irreplaceable for now and ever. I strongly convinced that they are more complementing than substituting each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, really, so, still, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2108.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 21.0 315.596192385 7% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 100.380952381 5.12529762239 1959% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 2.14069514293 4.20363070211 51% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 25.3876967721 2.80592935109 905% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 21.0 176.041082164 12% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 1.0 0.561755894193 178% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 22.8 1.60771543086 1418% => Avg_syllables_per_word is high.
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 5.0 20.2975951904 25% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 205.235687686 49.4020404114 415% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 527.0 106.682146367 494% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 5.25 20.7667163134 25% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.0 7.06120827912 269% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188002039411 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118636815529 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490250623919 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118636815529 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490250623919 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 454.0 13.0946893788 3467% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1727.12 50.2224549098 -3439% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 255.4 11.3001002004 2260% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 560.78 12.4159519038 4517% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.67 8.58950901804 229% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 21.0 78.4519038076 27% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 44.0 10.1190380762 435% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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