Now a days, for many people the internet is replacing regular books. What do you think will happen in the feature and what is your opinion about the trend?
In the past two decades internet usage taking drastic changes on the people moreover,lessusage of regular books. In may wildest imagination, there will be no demand for books in the feature on the other hand there are many books present in website in the form of ebooks and digital library that way every one use screens. for instance my self usse internet at any time when need to refer somedata interested of regular books. It is interesting to speculate what will happen in the feature? consequently in the further all are live in paper free nature.
However, by using screens frequently we get side effects also and the major effect on eye. I am worried about the trend of paper free world. As far as I known, children will suffer from near sight by habit of screen reading. For example recently a news in day news paper that is in chain most of the children are suffering with nearsighted by using of tabs and mobile's regularly. If it continue inthe feature majority of population will wear glasses.
In conclusion, the advancing internet technology definitely alter the way people read in the feature. As a consequence, the next era will be paperless and eyes of youngsters.
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| 2019-08-14 | harmankaur | 61 | view |
| 2018-06-27 | SNEHA GANGWANI | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79024390244 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73398859448 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653658536585 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9440042381 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8333333333 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244446305918 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802220363008 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743765354632 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13844616625 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817889161995 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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