Now many big cities in the world are increasing in size. What are the problems associated with it? What are the solution to these problems?
In this age of globalization, big cities are running the world by moving the financial wheel and being the center of scientific researches. As a result, many of these cities are expanding their geographic border to keep up with the ever-growing number of people entering these areas. However, menace like harming the environment and loosing cultural heritage sites should be addressed vigorously in order to identify the ways to overcome the threats.
To begin with, the increase on city sizes is dangerous for the environment. To elaborate, deforestation and air pollution may begin to occur on the areas that became included under the municipality zone. As the city expands, more construction will take places and the heavy traffic and factories will cause higher amount of carbon emission. To tackle this issue, government should be careful and only allow city expansion upon ensuring that no greenery will be affected and only eco-friendly vehicle can be driven on the locality. For example, a recent study from Cambridge University has discovered that city-life is the biggest challenge for environmental issues and these risks can be controlled through enforcing law and regulation against deforestation and carbon footprint.
Secondly, a number of cultural heritage sites are coming closer to the city areas and sometimes these places even fall inside the new map which can destroy the long tradition, cultural value and beauty of these locations and cultural community. In other words, chaos of metropolitan and continuous construction to commercialize the area often disturb the ethnic and historical harmony of that location. A way forward could be to introduce government policy to protect heritage site from the expansion of city areas. If national law discourage commercial and industrial activities inside the community near local heritage site, then such zones will be avoided. For instead, Tokyo is expanding since last five years, but their government was always careful to keep their heritage sites save and imposed 50% higher tax to the west of the city which demoralized the businesses to go to that side. As a result, temples and old town on that area was able to save the authenticity.
To conclude, government should be conscious about the demerits of city expansion as environment and cultural heritage sites are two most important factors for any country's peace and prosperity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 976, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...area was able to save the authenticity. To conclude, government should be consci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for example, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2051.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36910994764 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8731770768 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568062827225 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.896049946 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.733333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4666666667 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116830232388 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457107935087 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582502059099 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755390766264 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448963148825 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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