Should private schools receive government funding?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The number of private schools are increasing nowadays and citizens are relying on this medium more than public schools because of education quality and limitation on seats in public schools. There is an ongoing argument related to government funding allocation for private schools and I believe private schools should receive government funding to keep the parents out of any excessive burden and to protect the literacy rate of the country.
First of all, private schooling is not always a choice of affluent class, but only option for some of the families as public schools has limited seats. Private schooling is highly expensive and parents with an average income faces financial struggles to send their kids to the schools. If private academic institutes receive grants, only then the tuition fees will decrease and the citizen’s life standard will not be hampered to send their kids to school. Ultimately, it is government’s duty to make sure that the families are not pressurized for education which is one of the basic needs. Countries with low tuition fees in public schools are a good example for this as couples of those countries has found more relaxed and financially stable.
Secondly, if government do not provide funding for private education, then it will cause more drop outs and eventually the literacy rate of the country will fall. Because of the high tuition fees, poor and middle class will not be able to get educated and education will become a practice for only higher class. As a result, nation’s success in science, medical or in economy will be highly effected which cannot be compensated through the money that money that is saved by the government, instead of investing on private schools. For example, Germany, Sweden, Canada and the countries where government is supporting the private schools, are making huge progress in education.
To conclude, government should fund the private schools to help their citizens from financial struggles and to raise a literate new generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... of affluent class, but only option for some of the families as public schools has limited ...
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Line 6, column 446, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'money that'.
Suggestion: money that
...which cannot be compensated through the money that money that is saved by the government, instead of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21951219512 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71762485094 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52743902439 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.7379075683 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.666666667 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232499368975 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967182199776 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713250886253 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169387053127 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568165762173 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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