Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicine and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animal to suffer, while other are in favour of these because of their benefit to humanity. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Animal testing has long been contentious issue by the emergence of well-established animal activist society. While proponents, of animal inclusion as a part of creating new product, consider it inevitable for the human progress, I firmly believe that these practices should be forbidden due to their dire consequences on animal species.
To those who think that any scientific development is impossible without including animals as a trial, perhaps, the principal argument is the accelerated pace of advancement in science resulted since the introduction of the test dose method involving various species of rats, dogs and guinea pigs. For instance, as stated in METRO Australia, 90 percent of the dog anatomy resembles to human anatomy and all the ortho-medicines are successful due to their pre commercial launch experiments on dogs.
To those who oppose, the trying out any new product on naive creature without any certainty of the result, the animal testing is nothing but a cruelty and should be prohibited through legislation. In my opinion, every creature, great or small, has an inherent right to experience ultimate freedom and confining any creature for the sake of experimentation or the production of commercial product is barbaric. Take the report published in the journal of Animal Rights 2011 as an example, the statistics shows that 12000 animals underwent severe pain and suffering in Pakistan in the name of product tester.
In conclusion, even though people argue that animal testing is valuable for humans, I, as a human, strongly oppose the notion and consider it as most painful scientific procedure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Pakistan in the name of product tester. In conclusion, even though people argue ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33852140078 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01663091463 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626459143969 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.9590070876 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.5 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.125 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229158142644 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973811485978 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408900611999 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133522398002 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448997655187 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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