There is no doubt that majority of the people are obsessed with film stars and celebrities in recent times. Since celebrities are the role model of many youngsters, their action can exert a significant impact on their follower’s lives. Although I agree with this statement to some extent, I also believe that not all the celebrities are bad influence as some can be inspirational too.
To begin with, there are some celebrities who have got name and fame just because of their looks and bank balance rather than their talents and accomplishments. Despite lacking skills and excellency, they have countless followers all across the world, who idolize and worship them for their status. Moreover, these fans would do anything to mimic their favourite celebrities’ lifestyles without having a conscience of such actions. For instance, a Bangladeshi actor was caught smoking in a viral video a few days ago, which has incited many adolescents to hooked on to smoking. Needless to say, these teenagers got provoked by the flamboyant lifestyle of that actor. Fortunately, the number of such celebrities in the industry is very negligible.
On the other hand, celebrities can play a positive role in the lives of their admirers. This is because majority of the superstars have the goodwill to contribute to their societies not only by their performance but also by participating in humanitarian activities. In other words, they often want to set up a good example for their followers, which would immortalize them into their devotee’s heart. A recent survey published in the Filmfare magazine reported that stardoms, who frequently participate in philanthropic activities, such as providing monetary help to impecunious students or distributing relief to flood victims are more popular than others. What’s more, these noble acts serve as an encouragement and inspiration for their supporters. Therefore, it is quite evident that people can become positively influenced by the celebrities as well.
In conclusion, some celebrities can lead their follower’s life astray by setting up bad example, whereas others can motivate them by doing generous works. In the end of the day, it is up to the followers to decide which celebrities they want to become fan of.
- In many countries woman no longer feel the need to get married Some people believe that this is because woman are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require the financial security that marriage can bring To what extent do you agree or disa 83
- Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools Some people think that discipline should be the responsibilities of teachers while other thinks this is role of parents Discuss both sides and give your opinion 85
- Most societies has its homeless people Some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money 78
- Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world However these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science technology and business Why do you think that is What could be done to encourage more people 78
- In nearly all science courses at university there are significantly more male students than female students What is the reason for this What could be done to balance out the numbers 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir follower’s life astray by setting up bad example, whereas others can motivate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27624309392 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0491231693 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585635359116 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7821835841 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.352941176 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2941176471 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23529411765 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318895601733 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961867896747 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055357841751 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186794626021 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565789997552 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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