In today's modern world, computer is not merely a luxury, indeed, it has become a necessity. Although, many people think, it is beneficial for the personality development of a child. However, I firmly believe, it is not completely true, in fact, it is being used unwisely and hence it is turning into a social stigma.
To embark, development of a child means that he should be doing well both physically and mentally. Though, computer when arrived twenty years ago in my country seemed to be a boon but now it would not be justified to say so. The reason is that children nowadays overuse it. Although, there are various factors responsible for it but most important cause is the feasible accessibility to unlimited knowledge. They now can get their hands on almost every piece of information easily whether it is good or bad. Not just that, they can play games with their distant friends but they also have the opportunity to make slew friends on social sites like Facebook and Twitter. They not only chat with their friends, in fact, they also get to read about the celebrities life's which is quite intresting for them.
Though, there are several pros of using computer like you get a chance to learn new skills such as dance, painting etc. In addition, you can utilize it to improve knowledge but it should be used moderately. As we all know, extreme of anything is dangerous and technology is not an exception as it has detrimental impact on the health of children. It leads to many problems like Obesity, weakness of eye-sight and spine disorder. Furthermore, there are many ill-legal web sites which contains stuff that is lethal for the immature mind's of naive children to absorb.
To recapitulate, I would like to state assertively that one should definitely allow children to use computer for legitimate amount of time under the supervision of parents or teachers. This will enlighten their mind but we should also encourage children to play sports as well because it makes them strong and healthy and enhance their overall development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, well, in addition, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88538681948 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68298904701 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590257879656 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3434717005 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.294117647 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5294117647 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120382423405 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358078233827 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346249092667 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069031378124 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291179945956 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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