Nowadays, culture is more or less the same around the world compared to in the past. Is this a positive or negative trend?
In recent years, the increasing cultural similarity is gaining a great deal of attention throughout the world. Most importantly, it has been a bone of contention among the critics regarding its merits and demerits. While some people consider that it is really beneficial to the global community, I believe that it is actually bringing a lot of conflicts among our society.
To begin with, the cultural traditions of certain smaller communities are being wiped out due to the aggression of the prominent one. This means, people who belong to the bigger chunk, for example, the western culture, are always trying to uproot the minority cultures by all means. Therefore, it is not becoming a spontaneous expansion of cultures, rather it can be considered as a war against several aboriginals’ roots. Moreover, the victims of cultural hallucinations are now becoming bondingless to their own history, rituals, and everything. This, in turn, accelerating the process of cultural aggression and aggravating the disappearance of the last sign of the minority community on this earth.
On the other hand, some people agree with the school of thought that cultural openness is increasing cross border intimacy and thereby making the people more global. To them, sharing the experience is now the utmost priority which requires no boundaries. Therefore, the one world- one culture idea is gaining popularity with unprecedented speed. Furthermore, the noble concept of multiculturalism will go in vain unless the people do not understand the value of their own cultures and remain euphoric on how they are being consumed by other cultures.
All things considered, cultural difference is beneficial to maintain the originality, albeit it is somewhat barrier in exchanging views and ideas with people from the other side of the world. I personally believe the successful globalization can also be achieved without sacrificing own culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... making the people more global. To them, sharing the experience is now the utmost...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, if, moreover, really, regarding, so, therefore, while, for example, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40924092409 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09373155579 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610561056106 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.626947746 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.071428571 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128816384749 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433110197373 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038735449695 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731016019953 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247787999133 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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