In the pursuit of globalization, countries are losing their unique cultural identity. There are two major reasons for this problem. In my opinion, though, this is a positive change, it is lethal for cultural heritage that a country has been carrying so far.
One major cause of resonance in traditions of is that people are intrigued by western lifestyle. In other words, now contemporary clothing in globally is defined as smaller clothes. Whereas in earlier days it used to be improvisation of art. Furthermore, American food giants such as KFC, MacDonald's and Subway got in daily routine diet of people. This not only persuade young crowd away from traditional food, but it also discourages indigenous traders to compete with giants. Another, reason for tis this development is rise in trade either between continents or between two countries. In this way to sway foreign investment in own country on a global platform try to showcase how similar with investor country
Uniformity in cultures, creates ease of living for individual across the continents. American turned Indian, for instance, find comfortable there because the new land is indifferent from his home land. This is certainly a way more acknowledged tact globally
However, amalgamation and dilution of cultures ot a global level is risky for identification of indigenous or ethnic Skills. An European tourist would not visit India, for example, if he find there is nothing new either to see, or to explore here. This is a serious issue otherwise to demotivate tourism industry
In conclusion, trade and lifestyle are two main motivations behind loss of native cultural heritage. In think, though this is a positive change in my view, it might be detrimental from other point of views
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 182, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...globally is defined as smaller clothes. Whereas in earlier days it used to be improvisa...
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Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'A' instead of 'An' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: A
...ication of indigenous or ethnic Skills. An European tourist would not visit India,...
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Line 4, column 188, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'finds'.
Suggestion: finds
...uld not visit India, for example, if he find there is nothing new either to see, or ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16842105263 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90488598281 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656140350877 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.296519426 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134072041087 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426971313652 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416429538474 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0699985327615 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488377550978 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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