Nowadays, distance-learning programs have gained popularity, but some people argue that online courses can never be as good as those taken at a college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the contemporary world, education world has succeed to avail a variety of online courses. There is a ongoing trend of opting distance-learning instead of offline education. It is considered by many that such online courses do not offer a great quality which generally provided by the on campus courses. Personally, I am in the favour of distance-learning courses to a great extent.
First and foremost, distance learning courses are more advantageous than offline courses because they are cost-effective, save valuable time and also offer a great degree of flexibility for students. Firstly, time is considered as one of the most valuable entity for all people in this competitive world, hence students can save time by eliminating travel time and utilise that time for the productive study. Secondly, in-person classes are way more costlier than the online mode as offline classes can accommodate limited number of students in a particular class, but online class can have high number of students and teachers from a cabin can operate it without having big campuses. Last but not the least, the quality of education is still the similar for both the methods as tutors are the same and regardless of mode of education, it ultimately depends upon effective teaching methods.
On the other hand, offline courses are benefitial to gain experience from fellow students and group studies. Students have to come out from their comfort zone and study with descipline which might not be the case while opting online courses. Moreover, students can develop social skills by studying collectively with fellow students. Thus, for these reasons traditional style of courses are also very important.
To conclude, despite of having some merits of offline education, the latest distance learning courses seem superior by availing cost-effective, time-saving and flexible options and that too with same quality of education. However, offline education has its own significance and it can not be replaced by newer methods.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'succeeded'.
Suggestion: succeeded
...contemporary world, education world has succeed to avail a variety of online courses. T...
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Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...l a variety of online courses. There is a ongoing trend of opting distance-learni...
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Line 2, column 445, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'costlier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: costlier
...dy. Secondly, in-person classes are way more costlier than the online mode as offline classes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, of course, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31661442006 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9221278519 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542319749216 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2823685023 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.142857143 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185553828837 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066109388336 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401113795538 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117567088477 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228070556648 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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