In present time, families are accustoming to the idea of being distant from each other. This is happening because they are evolving from the old school thought of joint family system. The benefits of nuclear family definitely overshadow the latter system.
Nowadays, people have become more and more self-involved and the major component contributing to this matter is use of technology which includes personal mobile phones and laptops involving children. Kids nowadays even have their own cyber life. They are fully aware of Instagram, tiktok, Facebook and all other available social media sites. They have totally become tech savvy. Also, the co-dependency which was a decade back fashion is now eradicating. People prefer to stay to their own selves. They like privacy over several people of family hovering over their heads. For example, we are a family of 4 but, recently my husband’s brother got posted in the same place where we live. All of share our paternal house so, everyone has equal share. We cannot tell anyone off, even if we do not want to we have to put on a smiling face and show our best behavior towards our family members. Sometimes you just do not want to engage in a conversation, no matter how important it is, all you need is some alone time which is absolutely not possible if you are living with other 6 family members.
Moreover, every person in the family has different interests for as trivial as television program to as big as vacations. These matters cannot be resolved and bring to a conclusion regardless of how much effort you put in, you will always end up in some sort of un pleasant conversation leading to a distaste afterwards towards each other. In order to avoid such circumstances, it is much appropriate and convenient to separate ways in time before something big and horrendous happens. Therefore, we decided just in time to part ways in same home but in different portions of house in order to avoid any unfavorable circumstances. Which ultimately resulted in peace of mind for everyone.
In my opinion, living distantly definitely has more perks and privileges than living together. It for sure outweighs in advantages. It contributes to peace and tranquility.
- Nowadays weddings are becoming bigger and more expensive Why is it happening Is it a negative or a positive development 11
- Some people choose to work at one job for a long time Others prefer to change jobs frequently Which way do you think is better Use specific reasons and examples to explain your choice 84
- Nowadays families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this Why is this happening Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the drawbacks Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own exper 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 770, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'offs'.
Suggestion: offs
... has equal share. We cannot tell anyone off, even if we do not want to we have to p...
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Line 3, column 688, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...resulted in peace of mind for everyone. In my opinion, living distantly definite...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, sort of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96505376344 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77750880303 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594086021505 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.9871617736 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9545454545 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.40909090909 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163461729244 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449255635241 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457083701616 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881816494194 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531660760235 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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