Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world.
Unfortunately, it creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
There are people who believe that international tourism will create tension between people from different cultures but I completely disagree with this. Meeting people of various culture and tradition will improve the understanding and respect, between host people and the tourist.
On the one hand, it is believed by some that, while international tourism is developing as the biggest industry in the world, it will create tension between people of a different culture. These people argue that it is not necessary for a foreigner to have knowledge of the culture and tradition of the country he or she is visiting. It is possible to gain information by researching, but that would be enough because culture is unique for each region. For example, a country like India has infinite customs and tradition and to understand it from online or library would be nearly impossible. Tourists visiting places without understanding may hurt the feelings of locals unknowingly and may end in rift and misunderstanding.
However, even though people argue that tourism will increase tension, that is not true. I believe that this will increase understanding and respect towards other culture. When a tourist visits a new country, they meet people, local people of that country, they learn, understand and experience the way local people live, eat and follow their tradition. The host people will also have their share of experience in knowing a person from different culture. By helping the tourist and supporting the new person locals will express their respect. By this way all the cultural barriers can be reduced and improve relationships between human.
To conclude, although it is argued by some that growth in the tourism industry will create tension worldwide, in my opinion, this is not true. I believe that tourism will improve relationships between people in different countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29900332226 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83146929226 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495016611296 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.043405797 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281138233202 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108359087505 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105102624324 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209996506351 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707647147019 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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