Nowadays, the internet and television have given ordinary people a chance to become famous. Is this a positive or negative development?
In this technologically advanced world, the internet and television have considerable potential to change the lives of common men. In my opinion, this is a welcoming development which paves the way to aspiring career and prominent status. In this essay, I will support the positive aspects of this growing trend with suitable examples.
Firstly, the reality TV shows provide a big platform to regular people to showcase their innate talent. As it is too difficult to get an opportunity in this competitive world, many inborn talented artists sometimes struggle lifetime for one right moment. Therefore, with the increasing popularity of TV programmes, such as singing, cooking or dancing based shows, an ordinary individual gets a fair chance to demonstrate his talent on a large stage. For instance, "America got talent" and "Indian Idol" are primary examples of such competent shows which give birth to rising stars.
Secondly, access to the internet enables an individual to publish artwork freely on the world wide web. This means that individuals like us can advertise their skills or promote their business online without any barriers and with minimal investment. For instance, 'Cake Story' was an ordinary local bakery shop situated in Delhi NCR region but when the owner of the confectionary created his website to take order online and uploaded the videos of his baking skills over Youtube, then it becomes one of the leading bakers in the region. That is the power of the internet.
To conclude, the advantages associated with the TV and internet to shape an individual's career and promote one's business at a large scale are certainly positive and bring name and fame.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29304029304 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83651802522 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644688644689 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8760293347 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.416666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181229166199 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671813566072 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470327957564 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104973686723 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674117877144 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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