Now a days internet and television has given ordinary people a chance to become famous. Is this a positive or negative development?
In my opinion, yes the modern technology has given an ordinary man a chance to portray himself in their desired field. But, having said that it reflect both pros and corns which I try to explain in the below passage.
Initially, the first invention was television ,where man developed different kind of entertainment programs and provided news channel to know what’s happening around. But,at early stage of television people have become famous only through movies , which was a part of drama and action and only people who have television were able to watch.
However, as the technology grow internet has come into light which has given a chance to every person get cognitive from every corner of the world to develop their skills in different fields of art. Each one show the reliability of their work and try to gain attention of the audience with great applaud who watch their skills and there is no difference between men and women . Now, even women come out with different ideas and make themselves stand fit for every opportunity available . With the help of internet we can now post our views in youtube , twitter,Instagram, etc..where we find different talents like sports , movies, fashion shows , different arts, etc..
Apart from positive growth the usage of internet also has a negative reviews in todays world. When a person becomes famous we tend to know more about his life with respect to professional and personal life. They get trolled in media for their personal life and make it focused to society where they get abuses and humiliate them regardless of the gender .
In conclusion , we need this kind of positive growth for todays world to bring out the hidden talents and other side it’s we who need to stop these kind of negative abuses and wrong usage of technology .
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92905405405 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56385057093 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60472972973 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5243439501 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.583333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232061511701 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695211152539 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543509360466 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103478672164 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325912184753 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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