Nowadays a lot of young people use social media.
do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In many parts of the world, the popularity of social media is blossoming among the young generation. I believe it to be extremely beneficial not only in terms of fast communication but also provide educational benefits. This essay will explore how these two mega-advantages have the potential to outshine any of the minor drawbacks.
Social media brings forth a myriad of benefits for youngsters. Firstly, this new trend facilitates young people with an inexpensive mode of communication with friends and family who are living in far-flung areas. As many conventional means of connecting with people are much costlier as compared to social media, it gives the luxury to stay in touch at a very low cost. For example, a recent report published in the Daily times revealed that the average cost of internet package is three hundred and fifty dollars per year, while phone call charges are many-folds.
Secondly, online socializing gives the opportunity of group study to those students who are unable to visit their friend’s home. Because in the time-deprived era, online groups and communities allow students to study at home along with their other mates without leaving home. For instance, in recent times, it is mandatory for a tertiary student to join a WhatsApp group that is made by a teacher so that they can share helpful study material.
Admittedly, the only minor disadvantage that I can relate to this development is that young ones are always found glued to their smartphones since it irresistible for them to leave their phones. This burgeoning trend directly affects their academic careers, but this drawback is extremely rare and elusive and can be compensated if used for the right purpose with proper time management.
To conclude, the benefits of social media especially in terms of convenient communication and facilitating the students in the study can easily eclipse any of the drawbacks of time wastage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...onnecting with people are much costlier as compared to social media, it gives the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25477707006 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89610241972 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595541401274 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.602761245 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.923076923 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149744455095 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563673935118 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519791333541 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802892974679 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397429111442 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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