As living cost are tremendously increased and simultaneously working trend is also changed, these days it is quite common that both mother and father are working and because of this a question has been arises who will take care of their children. Few parents feel that their parents or any close relatives are the trustful person who can take care of their children in a perfect manner and I completely agree on it , but some trust that day care child centers are the best option because they assumed their children will get favorable learning environment.
There is no doubt for the past couples of years, many childcare centers are became popular and parents prefer to send their children there. The main reason behind this is they pretend that these centers are designed and run by highly skilled professionals and they know the learning strategy of a child and this will enhance the knowledge of their children. For an example, In India few well educational institutes are investing huge amount of money to setup childcare and learning centers. However, it is also observed that there type of centers are just money minded and makes huge profit instated of giving quality learning facilities.
On the other side, Few parents gave first preference to their closed relatives instead of private school or tutor and there are few strong points which support this concept. First point is, parents feel secure and safe when their children are under the observation of their family member. Secondly, These type of responsibilities make the bonding between the family strong. And above all of this it also saved the money up to some extend.
I personally feel that because of hectic schedule and busy lifestyle we are losing the value of relations and sending children to a care center would be good decision but compared to taken care by a relative is far better, because it will help us to maintain the family bounding.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a perfect manner" with adverb for "perfect"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...son who can take care of their children in a perfect manner and I completely agree on it , but some...
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Suggestion: ,
...fect manner and I completely agree on it , but some trust that day care child cent...
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Suggestion: become
...es of years, many childcare centers are became popular and parents prefer to send thei...
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Message: Did you mean 'to set up'?
Suggestion: to set up
...utes are investing huge amount of money to setup childcare and learning centers. However...
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Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...this it also saved the money up to some extend. I personally feel that because of h...
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...elp us to maintain the family bounding.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92615384615 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49283855149 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556923076923 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2410271106 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.545454545 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5454545455 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287278276817 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991347656686 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638427205823 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158907439915 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513431206671 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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