Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents other family members like grandparents can take care of their children while others think that childcare centers provide the best care. Discuss both views and and give your opinion.
In recent years, since most parents' working time has increased, taking care of children at home is deemed to be family members' duty, especially grandparents. However, others are against the idea, claiming that nursery facilities could present better care. I personally agree that children should be attending childcare.
On one hand, toddlers staying at home with family members is beneficial in some ways. Firstly, it can enhance emotional connections within the family. Younger children tend to bond with people who they spend most time with so if being taken care of by grandparents, they can develop a close and loving relationship. Secondly, being raised at home provides children with a more loving, secure and safe environment. The clean environment and one on one attention, providing enough nutrition, care and affection, is important for children's physical and mental development.
On the other hand, I believe that daycare centers have great advantages. First, facilities usually provide children with numerous activities from academic to artsy subjects. These activities could increase their intelligence, academic achievement and imagination, which may affect future studies results. Furthermore, being at childcare could help one improve their social skills and self-awareness. Since they live in a commuting environment where everybody is different from a young age, children will be able to recognize their own emotions, strengths, preferences,... They will interact with more people, face more challenges and experience more.
All things considered, although some people believe that children should be taken care by family members at home, I, however, still think that daycare is more beneficial because it has brought advantages to children in terms of future achievements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7063197026 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97212302763 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631970260223 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2827305956 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.642857143 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219075878038 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713575952038 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590531437612 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143629013685 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512759944037 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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