Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe that other family members can take care of their children, while others think childcare centers are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent decades, it has become a norm for both parents to work. Although some employed parents state that rest of the family can keep an eye on the younger ones, others argue that childcare facilities are more beneficial in terms of education and social training.
On the one hand, kids who grow up in the safety of their home surrounded by their loved ones never feel neglected or get bullied by their peers. No one can be more affectionate toward a child and cherish him/her more than his/her grandparents. Moreover, by keeping infants away from public places such as kindergarten, there is a lower risk that they catch contagious diseases. For example, children who spend half of their days in a classroom filled with kids with different family backgrounds and thus various level of hygiene are most likely to get sick.
On the other hand, bringing up children at home makes them more prone to be introvert upon entering primary school since they have not been given the chance to learn how to communicate with children of their own age. They usually spend majority of their times interacting with grownups who have completely different characteristics than children. For example, adults are more patient, understanding, and sympathetic than kids who play games like their lives depend on it, with more passion and especially competitiveness. By leaving children on their own, parents give them the opportunity to learn how to socialize with others, how to defend themselves, and more importantly how to blend in. These are only some of the skills that a child can acquire through attending preschool activities designed masterfully by experienced teachers to nurture various essential abilities in children. Therefore, in my opinion, children must go to childcare centers to receive better training and get prepared to enter their society.
In conclusion, although no one can offer more love to children than their family member, there are the childcare facilities which provide a more realistic environment and better social training for kids. Hence, they are more suitable for taking care of children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 709, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1773255814 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76797770609 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4292562109 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.214285714 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239025835758 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846524441107 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546295832751 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159656855229 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063870409078 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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