Nowadays many young people deliberately damage public places.
What are the causes and solutions?
In the past, public place was developed for the benefit of society and everybody seem to respect that. Sadly, now a day’s youth are playing a crucial role for destroying and damaging the public places. They give importance to socialization and want to spend more time with friends on public place. Needlessly they did not care about the cleanliness which is the major reason of damaging public places.
First of all, some young people are more inclined towards their social life. thus its spend more time in the public place with friends , mostly importantly they show the power in the public parks with some rough stuff like smoking, loudly speaking and ragging . Even young peoples are destroying the peacefulness of that place for the aging people and children’s. Another major issue which we have seems schools, college’s people who is well educated behaving with the same habit as other. They are eating drinking on the public places and throw back all wastage materials on the mid of the place even they are waste bin. If someone ask to remove, they showing his muscles power and fight.
To counter this, Govt. should take action against this issues. It’s necessary to aware people with the public message to save the city clean and beautiful, not only Govt. but also education system should take responsibility to aware people. Now it’s compulsory for Govt. to take action against these crimes. Otherwise, all the efforts and money will waste. They should installed the CCTV on all public place or assign some staff for controlling , if someone found they should Chillan or assign some serious punishment which are painful for accuse and example of other .
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-09-03 | heyimmehak@gmail.com | 84 | view |
| 2022-09-03 | aman kola | 84 | view |
| 2021-07-19 | JJsidhu | 78 | view |
| 2020-10-30 | MyNguyen | 84 | view |
| 2020-07-14 | Jaskaran Kaur | 78 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...re inclined towards their social life. thus its spend more time in the public place...
^^^^
Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: thus,
...re inclined towards their social life. thus its spend more time in the public place...
^^^^
Line 2, column 137, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...re time in the public place with friends , mostly importantly they show the power ...
^^
Line 2, column 262, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ike smoking, loudly speaking and ragging . Even young peoples are destroying the p...
^^
Line 2, column 647, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'asks'.
Suggestion: asks
...ace even they are waste bin. If someone ask to remove, they showing his muscles pow...
^^^
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... this, Govt. should take action against this issues. It apos;s necessary to aware pe...
^^^^
Line 3, column 456, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ace or assign some staff for controlling , if someone found they should Chillan or...
^^
Line 3, column 558, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... punishment which are painful for accuse and example of other .
^^
Line 3, column 563, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...shment which are painful for accuse and example of other .
^^^
Line 3, column 582, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...inful for accuse and example of other .
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, thus, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95422535211 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28913738791 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580985915493 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.0254256341 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1666666667 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151906081794 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493253715106 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537435320289 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112968559519 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524704066022 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.