Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? what are the effects on society and family life?
In recent years, people tend to have children when they are getting older. There are several reasons for this tendency, which is having a significant impact on both family and the community.
There are two main reasons why people are deciding against having children when they are young. One reason is that many citizens would like to concentrate on their career rather than family. The young generation prefers to achieve the higher position in their company and in social life, so they do not want to split their time for having babies. Another reason is that delaying childbirth could give young people more time to enjoy their lives. For example, the number of couples in Western countries would like to spend their leisure time for discovering and traveling around the world.
However, this tendency could bring many negative effects to both family life and society. Firstly, raising kids could be challenging for older parents. The gap between two generations might make them hard to communicate and understand each other. Secondly, in long-term, the labor workforce for the country can be affected. The labor shortage in some industries may occur due to the declining of the young employees.
In conclusion, there are a number of reasons why more and more people prefer to have kids later in their life. Therefore, this trend contains a lot of negative effects to individual families and society.
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- International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment.Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages? 73
- You bought a music concert ticket. However you are unable to go. So you offer the ticket to your friend.- explain detailed the concert.- why you are unable to go- how can your friend receive the ticket. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09051724138 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45182098237 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2382940398 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.3571428571 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309775178438 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102030007279 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110721949475 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202837121046 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118230883069 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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