At present, a growing number of couples prefer to start family at later years. This is majorly because of the increasing competition in every field. This essay will discuss why this trend is more fruitful not only for the couples but also the society despite some pitfalls.
The principal reason why partners delay kids in their life is that they want to compete and have a better life ahead. Without responsibilities, it is much easier to reach the zenith point in life. Another reason is that the lovers want to spend some years together to find compatibility and spend quality time together because after having children, the love and care will be shared with the child as well.
On the one hand, having children late in life has detrimental effects on the female's health. It is because their reproductive system does not get fully utilized since the age of 30, it starts to grow severe issues. It is scientifically proven that earlier ladies rarely faced problems with reproductive organs but now the number is continuously proliferating due to this phenomenon only. If this trend continues, we will have more females struggling with problems with PCODs. Therefore, the more couples will have children late in their life, the more the problems they will encounter.
On the other hand, this is advantageous for individuals to flourish in careers and achieve whatever they have desired for. Because they are devoid of any personal responsibilities, they are more likely to focus on their careers. This gives an equal opportunity to both male and female as it is generally females who stops their professional career in order to take care of the infants. It not only promotes equality in the workplace but is also beneficial for the country as both will earn snd pay taxes to the government for the betterment of the society. Hence, it is imperative to procrastinate the decision of having kids.
In conclusion, although it adversely affects health, it provides great opportunities to attain success and strengthen the bond between the husband and wife. Also, the health issues can be controlled by following hatha yoga postures in case ladies decide to conceive late in life. Overall, it is advantageous for the careeer, personal bond and the nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'females'' or 'female's'?
Suggestion: females'; female's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, therefore, well, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02925531915 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78238650858 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550531914894 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9825186975 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.055555556 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250013104944 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691445887599 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743432349626 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123458447186 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678567256615 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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