Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
In the present day world, many parents agree to posses children at later stages of life. this essay will first discuss which elements lead to this decision; secondly, it will address the question of what impact it has on society and domestic life, followed by reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, there are several explanations for this, on the first hand, caregivers mindset of making a successful career prior to having babies open the way for this cause. As to give an effective brought up to a child requires resources such as money, time, and healthy living style. For this, modern couples wait to accumulate enough money to ensure a better life for their children. Moreover, newly married couple wants to enjoy their life, as responsibilities further increases by the birth of a baby. For instance, pupil demands home care, family-oriented time, aid in learning various skills, and better start at school. which kins are unwilling to provide before a specific plan.
On the other hand, getting down to the question of, influence of late parenthood on the society and on family life. it affects both in positive as well as negative ways. Firstly, late motherhood badly affects maternal health. For instance, it increases the probability of miscarriage, complications, and health-related issues such as High blood pressure, diabetes. Furthermore, close relations do not possess enough stamina because of age factor, handle children efficiently. For example, it needs enough energy, patience and babysitting skills to look after the infant, managing child-related chores. However, a child born to prosper adults receive a more comprehensive education, advance facilities, hence contributing to his long-term development. That, in a way, benefits the nation positively.
To conclude, the rationale for delayed parenthood are numerous. hence, this tendency bears both advantages and disadvantages to the citizens and family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96117656797 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.3143894906 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2777777778 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195530742966 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445325876546 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546625140757 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990756767571 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732870440657 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.