NOWADAYS MORE AND MORE PEOPLE PREFER TO WEAR FASHIONABLE CLOTHES. IS THIS A GOOD OR A BAND TREND?
In this modern era, attires play an indispensable role in society. Most of the people prefer to wear different trendy outfits. I think it is a positive trend/shift and this will be elaborated in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, there are multifarious benefits of wearing branded stuff. It can not only increase self-confidence but also improves the self-esteem of an individual. To cite an example, a recent survey conducted by a leading magazine reveals that 89 % of people who wear modern garments are full of confidence and always feel energetic. Secondly, trendy fabrics enhance the personality and image of a person and after wearing modern wear can make a person center of attraction. In today’s world, clothing plays a crucial role in the dignity and respect for a person. To illustrate, in malls or in shops, people who are wearing fashionable and expensive clothes get easily noted than those of casual wear.
On the other side, at times, becoming more stylish can create a negative impact on our personality. In many situations when a person does not know what to wear is a cumbersome problem. For example, if a person trying to wear fancy clothes at a funeral then it can create a lot of controversies.
Thus, it is fair to conclude that modern apparel plays a vital role in all walks of life as it can boost self-confidence, smartness and create a good reputation of the person among friends and in society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92213114754 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96792796714 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606557377049 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7579084423 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3846153846 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230256519996 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746683584975 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531512904981 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118871538204 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571065997948 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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