Nowadays more and more people prefer to wear fashionable clothes. Is this a good or a band trend?
Since the beginning of the twenty-first century, the millennials are becoming increasingly conscious of their outfits. These days people are becoming more inclined towards wearing the latest fashion in order to look attractive. This essay opines that it is a negative development which has elicited serious health concerns.
Firstly, the desire to wear trending attire pushes people toward various health problems. This is because the majority of the latest attires are built to be slim-fit, and in order to look good in such dresses, men and women do crash dieting or try to lose weight in a couple of weeks which harms their immune system. The surge in the cases of bulimia and anorexia among youngsters, for instance, is a ubiquitous example of how the longing to fit-in the latest fashion is harming people’s health. Apparently, such trends have drastic consequences for society.
Secondly, this trend can elicit feelings of self-doubt. Since trending dresses come with a huge price tag, not everyone can afford them and when someone is unable to buy them, they develop negativity becoming a victim of inferiority complex. In addition, while buying such outfits, one might not consider whether a dress would look good on them or not that can make a person turn into a laughingstock eventually lowering their self-esteem that cannot be think of a good trend in any way.
To conclude, if following fashion means starving one’s body or to wear clothes that can make a person a funny figure, it is a highly unwelcomed development needed to be ceased the sooner the better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07662835249 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70217365978 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624521072797 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9892811272 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.454545455 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229480006644 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811763503236 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607038811972 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123091868706 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302285982051 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.