Nowadays online shopping is extremely popular. Discuss the impact of it on the environment and on people, who lost their jobs because of it.
With the introduction of electronic commerce business model, purchasing goods online is becoming increasingly well-liked. Even though this trend has brought convenience for buyers, the negative effects of it cannot be undermined. This essay will discuss how shopping over the internet is exacerbating environmental issues as well as the unemployment that it causes.
Undoubtedly, online shopping is degrading the environment in various ways. Firstly, e-commerce websites host numerous flash sales throughout a year to increase their profit which elicits people to buy more and discard their old products. Most of the time, old goods end-up in landfills or dump-yards, where they affect soil fertility. For instance, due to the popularity of e-commerce websites such as Amazon, eBay and Snapdeal the U.S government has reported a 35% increase in their electronic refuse. In addition, packaging material such as plastic wrapping or plastic bags used to ship ordered products worsen the issue of land pollution since they are going to be a landfill site once the products are opened. Keeping in mind the magnitude of orders placed online, these non-biodegradable contaminants can be deadly for our environment. Thus, buying things online can have dire environmental consequences.
In terms of job opportunities, online shopping is replacing physical stores as everything is done virtually. Many a time, employers competing with huge electronic stores lay-off employees in order to compete with the prices of these cyber stores. As a consequence, laid-off personnel resort to performing menial jobs which drastically reduces their quality of life as well as have the potential to make people depressed that are working below their deserving designation. In India, for instance, a lot of electronic retailers and clothing showrooms are been shut down since they cannot provide competitive deals as their online counterparts. Eventually, making many salespeople, managers and other employees left without work and depressed. Thus, buying goods over the internet is discouraging local businesses and people perform unskilled jobs in the long run to survive.
To conclude, shopping over the internet seems to be a hassle-free option; however, it stimuli use of disposable products that are not at all eco-friendly, in addition, clinch jobs from people who might not be able to reach the same level of corporate success once they had.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...such as Amazon, eBay and Snapdeal the U.S government has reported a 35% increase ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53351206434 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04798266156 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608579088472 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9618260382 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.411764706 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9411764706 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199300252011 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590383486096 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542176081199 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107262293943 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297508286876 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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