Nowadays more tasks at home and work are being performed by robots. Why do you think it is happening? Is it a negative or positive development?
Today, technology innovations such as robots have become an integral part of our lives and used to perform various tasks at home and at work. There are several social and economic reasons behind the growing popularity of robots. However, in my opinion, the increase in unemployment and obesity rate, because of the extended use of robots, has negatively impacted the society.
First and foremost, our lifestyle has been changed dramatically over the years, and we have become super busy because of our demanding careers and happening social life. Obviously, this requires time. Since we all have only 24 hours in a day to complete all the targets, the requirement for time-saving gadgets increases. Robots meet this demand perfectly. They can do the household chores, such as cooking, cleaning, and washing, faster and more efficiently than us. For instance, robots such as Scooba and Mint can also do the wet cleaning of the floor along with vacuum cleaning. Furthermore, Robots can work anywhere in any environmental condition whether it is space, underwater, in extreme heat or wind etc. Robots can be used anywhere where human safety is a huge concern.
However, where robots are increasing the efficiency of many businesses, they are also increasing the unemployment rate. Because of the low cost of robots, many manufacturing companies had replaced the human workers, and working-class labor is unable to provide the basic necessities to their family. For instance, companies like Amazon and Walmart has replaced their workers with the automatic billing machine counters in their stores and this causes many people to lose their job. In addition, if ultimately robots would do all the work, and the humans will just sit and monitor them, health hazards will increase rapidly. The nation will struggle with the obesity issue among peoples.
To conclude, the growing popularity of robots can be attributed to the fact that they are highly efficient in terms of time and cost. In my opinion, it is a negative trend as people and nation both will suffer from social issues such as unemployment and obesity.
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sues such as unemployment and obesity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16279069767 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69628949013 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7060890749 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137489072925 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038168551928 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435956006989 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880509073729 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604662528602 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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