Some people think that it is beneficial for old people to learn something new while others believe that once a person is past 65 years of age it is too late to learn. What is your opinion?
It is considered that seniors can benefit from learning something modern, whereas others argue that it is too late for senior citizens to learn something new. However, in my opinion, older people can considerably benefit from learning new things.
To begin with, a person is never too late to learn something new, and senior citizens can receive substantial benefits from increasing their knowledge across a broad range of subjects. The risk of health conditions that affect memory increases with age. However, studying a new language or learning a mentally demanding skill like photography or how to use an iPad/iPhone, for instance, improves their cognitive functioning and can prevent major memory lapses. In addition, mastering a new concept or skills gives them immense pleasure and thus they can enjoy the feeling of having high self-esteem.
Furthermore, learning with others is a wonderful way to prevent isolation. Nowadays, there are many senior-friendly classes available where they can connect with people of the same interests, and he or she can benefit from the reinforcement that comes from learning in a collaborative environment. Education does not just provide senior more brainpower, it also has a powerful effect on their physical capabilities. For example, woodworking, gardening, and other senior-friendly pursuits all provide exercise during the day. Whether grasping a tool while learning a new quilting technique or kneeling in the garden provide the exercise and flexibility to joints.
In conclusion, learning new skills can bring enormous benefits to older adults in relation to their well-being including social, cognitive, and emotional health benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ably benefit from learning new things. To begin with, a person is never too lat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, so, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5953307393 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03534369215 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610894941634 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4294303314 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.833333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9166666667 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249373967104 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982383439994 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729677896402 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163382634427 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855278691705 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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