Nowadays most people are not as fit and active, as they were in the past. What are the main causes of this situation? Suggest some possible solutions
Staying fit is of utmost importance for leading a healthy life. A study states that, humans are not as healthy and energetic as they were in earlier times. A changed lifestyle is a key factor resulting in this detrimental effect on people. In this essay, I will cite the reasons and few effective solutions for overcoming this problem.
In recent years, there is a substantial change in an individual's way of life. Eating easily available and cheap junk food instead of home-cooked food and pursuing corporate jobs which promote a sedentary lifestyle are two factors that have a detrimental impact on an individual's health. Furthermore, due to improved standard of living, people prefer to use vehicles even for traveling shorter distances which negatively impact their physical fitness. Thus, unhealthy food habits and desk-bound lifestyles are two key factors responsible for people being less fit than humans in earlier times.
However, people can put a check on their fitness through multifold ways. Firstly, a person can stay fit by following healthy lifestyle like regular exercise, eating nutritious food and minimizing the use of machines and vehicles for daily tasks. This will not only help them lead a healthy life but also strengthen their immunity to fight against fatal viruses. Secondly, office goers should practice desk yoga or other such regimes which would aid them to stay active throughout the day. Thus, by practicing simple techniques a person can stay fit and active.
To conclude, a considerable lifestyle change has deleterious impact on human health which can be lowered by following healthy habits. Eating healthy and doing regular workouts can assist a person to stay fit and active.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14130434783 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63527870762 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579710144928 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 276.0 20.2975951904 1360% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1419.0 106.682146367 1330% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 276.0 20.7667163134 1329% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 85.0 7.06120827912 1204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135117582695 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135117582695 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875713226743 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234149998725 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 140.8 13.0946893788 1075% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -208.66 50.2224549098 -415% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 110.9 11.3001002004 981% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.01 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.73 8.58950901804 253% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 9.78957915832 623% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 112.4 10.1190380762 1111% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 61.0 10.7795591182 566% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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