Nowadays overheating become a serious problem for the wealthy nations, a problem that is even greater than hunger to others. Why is this happening? what can be the solution?
" There is enough in the world for everyone's need, but not for the greed" - A quote by Mahatma Gandhi. Change in lifestyle has impacted many facets of the human life and so the eating habit. Where the hunger is already an existing concern of many poor countries, now, overeating is becoming a newer issue of many affluent countries. There are plenty of reasons behind this negative development, few of them can be explained here with possible solutions to rid of from it.
To commence with, globalization has opened the door for many international food chains to serve the people at the doorstep. ...
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Availability of the attactive offers on tempting cuisine has motivated people to eat out unlimitedly.
Error: attactive Suggestion: attractive
Error: unlimitedly Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: All in all, many countries have very limited resouces where their citizens are not getting enough food for their family.
Error: resouces Suggestion: resources
flaws:
Something wrong with the conclusion. It is off the topic.
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when you meet this kind of essays in the future, you may develop 4 paragraphs:
One paragraph for ' Why is this happening?'
One paragraph for ' what can be the solution?'
Because two paragraphs for ' Why is this happening?' are relatively more. or you can put less content for those two paragraphs if you still like to keep 5 paragraphs.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 442 350
No. of Characters: 2256 1500
No. of Different Words: 247 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.585 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.104 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.727 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 173 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 116 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 86 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 55 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.217 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.433 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.391 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.322 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.534 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.11 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...and insecurity in the relationships are some of the examples of such mental disturbance whe...
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Line 5, column 509, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y physical ailments which can affect the economic balance of the country in many ...
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Line 8, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bout the consequences of overeating with possible measures. Media can play a grea...
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Line 8, column 295, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ing in small portions should be followed . People should control on their temptati...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.273469387755 0.247107183377 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.134693877551 0.155533422707 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.1 0.0946595960268 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0448979591837 0.0501214627716 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0122448979592 0.0437548338989 28% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.134693877551 0.122226691241 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0510204081633 0.0403226058552 127% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80189306035 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0224489795918 0.0326793684256 69% => OK
Particles: 0.00204081632653 0.00163938923432 124% => OK
Determiners: 0.108163265306 0.0861772015684 126% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0204081632653 0.021408717616 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0142857142857 0.011925033212 120% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2778.0 1933.35771543 144% => OK
No of words: 445.0 316.048096192 141% => OK
Chars per words: 6.24269662921 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.20517956788 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.4 0.374742101984 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.276404494382 0.28420135186 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.202247191011 0.203846283523 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.139325842697 0.137316102897 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80189306035 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 176.037074148 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557303370787 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 66.6077428212 60.7387585426 110% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0891783567 137% => OK
Sentence length: 20.2272727273 20.7743622355 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2194602877 49.517814964 59% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.272727273 127.492653851 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2272727273 20.7743622355 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 47.8677221655 49.1944974215 97% => OK
Elegance: 2.39361702128 1.69124875643 142% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220785520127 0.332605444948 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0895557150019 0.102741220458 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0477139944454 0.0668466124924 71% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.526215400352 0.534860350844 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.111097734901 0.148594505496 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945078306973 0.134430193775 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481339733024 0.0742795772207 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.437561317115 0.324371583561 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0617333353498 0.0638462369009 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159326055175 0.228012699653 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279026073739 0.058150111329 48% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 10.4468937876 191% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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