Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed.
What is the reason for doing this?
Is this a negative or positive development?
Nowadays children are under pressure of their parents to succeed. It happens because parents believe they are entirely responsible for whether their children excel or not. This development might lead to various consequences, which could affect health of the youth and relationships between generations.
Modern parents are certain that they have to take care of their children's future. Parents are made to constantly fear that they are never doing enough for children to succeed. These insecurities are successfully exploited by third parties which are connected with marketing and selling in an educational segment. For example, adults are tempted by governments and status-obsessed schools to acquire additional courses, special programmes and educational materials. Moreover, private tuition can be used with the goal of giving every child more knowledge than they can digest, which often means that a child might feel overwhelmed.
Consequences of this harmful development are likely to be very serious for both children's health and relationships inside families. First, never-ending hothousing may result in children developing anxiety and other stress-related diseases. Apart from being detrimental to child’s psychology, it can also entail increased medical expenses for parents. Second, relationships inside the family can also suffer. When parents push their children too much, they deprive them of their carefree childhood, and, which can be even worse, they might lose the children's trust. As a result, best years of one's life pass unnoticed due to excessive workload and strained family relationships.
In conclusion, I believe that tiger parenting is a negative tendency which cannot help parents to achieve their goals in the process of upbringing. Adults should appreciate and encourage the curiosity of their children rather than pushing them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 581, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the best'.
Suggestion: , the best
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Line 3, column 597, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, third, apart from, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72661870504 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9678242794 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636690647482 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2007111297 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30430535718 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100479468099 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958970455122 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190416909131 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758518189738 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.