Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed.
What is the reason for doing this?
Is this a negative or positive development?
In the recent years, children are being under immense pressure by their parents in order to achieve more and more success. Although there are many reason behind this attitude, I believe that it is a negative development.
The first and foremost reason behind this trend is due the higher expectations of the parents. In other words, parents would like to see their children in the top most position that they could not achieve in their life. That is why, many people make their children to study some courses like MBBS, dance and arts and so on regardless of their interest and talents. Furthermore, the expectation of parents start from the primary schooling and it grows further and further along with the growing up of children. As they expect some sort of satisfaction, once their kids succeeded.
In addition, we are in the competitive era since achieving success is considered by many parents as a great prestige. Getting admission in a reputed school, placement in a multinational company, what more, everything makes them more happy and to carry out these task they often pressuring their children. Even if they failed to meet their goals, instead of supporting, they are torched by their parents.
I think this is certainly a negative development. Since children are the bright future of any country, their education, living circumstances with lot of care, love and support is necessary. To illustrate, some recent studies of media highlighted that, the percentage of frustrated children are on the increase. Moreover, the incidence of eating disorders, crime, suicidal thoughts and depression are not a unusuall among today's generation. These all due to the stress and tension which unnecessarily created by their parents to make a child to gain success.
To summarize this topic, I would like to emphasize that, even though parents have the rights to encourage their children to learn more and succeeded in life, it is often led to a negative development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 405, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, i think, in addition, sort of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12654320988 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78880356358 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549382716049 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8777011723 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.8125 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287904592565 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935310962288 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589442268908 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172420442527 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414002515827 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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