Nowadays people are living longer after they retire. What are the problems caused by this? What measures can be taken to address such problems?
Nowadays after completing the job period, elderly people have a longer life span. This has brought some problems to the life of these people, so in the further discussion, this essay will not only focus on the issues associated with this situation but also suggests some solutions to deal with them effectively.
After retirement, various issues are faced by senior citizens. The retirees encounter loneliness and difficulties to deal with modern technologies. Firstly, during their retirement period, their children are busy in their own careers and they have to settle at different locations away from their parents thus retirees are left with no option other than to live alone. Secondly, senior citizens have less knowledge of technology like using mobiles, laptops, and the internet hence they kept their feeling within themselves. This is due to either slow learning abilities or hesitation from these gadgets, as a result, they can not use them to communicate with another person.
However, these difficulties can be resolved in the following ways. The issue of isolation could be tackled by keeping parents with their children. Living together with family gives them chance to express their thoughts as well as to share their experiences, to guide younger ones in the family. Secondly, learning about modern means of entertainment and communication is not an easy task for them, but with simple tutorials, it can be learned by them and in the family, grandchildren would make it easy for them.
In conclusion, although elders have to deal with problems after their retirement, with the support of family these issues can be removed from their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25093632959 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6944800008 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602996254682 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5643326347 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155055579987 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061240678924 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418614083455 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107168810293 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355491951293 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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